tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6169873633282793259.post6492004609766394191..comments2008-12-15T11:35:19.923-08:00mkr mousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01838749986259519446noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6169873633282793259.post-10865011522896023842008-12-15T10:19:00.000-08:002008-12-15T10:19:00.000-08:00commenting : )<BR/>I loved this. It was beautiful. I am glad it was intended as poetry, because, as I read it, I thought to myself, &#39;self, this is a poem!&#39;<BR/><BR/>I usually do not like or appreciate free&amp;blank verse. but this is beautiful, like such poetry should be.<BR/><BR/>I know that that comment won&#39;t necessarily help you improve, but yay for you :)Emilyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03561121901389604841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6169873633282793259.post-86596748282017889942008-12-05T19:59:00.000-08:002008-12-05T19:59:00.000-08:00Comment! :) Tear them apart if you want to, help me improve! It won't hurt me deeply, I assure you. ;)mkr mousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01838749986259519446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6169873633282793259.post-24976326302863125192008-12-05T12:14:00.000-08:002008-12-05T12:14:00.000-08:00Woe! You sarcastic, ironic labels! Why must you torture us so?!<BR/><BR/>I think they are also maniacal and malignant; particularly on cashmere and dresses...:|<BR/><BR/>(Would you rather that people comment or be silent on poetry posts, by the way?Blarneyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16750827378319402453noreply@blogger.com